Both of their expressions make me giggle, no idea why. I'm not familiar with the characters at all, but I do like their look, from the clothing to their spikyish orange/red hair.

The hands are probably my favorite part. They look just perfect (you make drawing hands look so easy. ). I like the softer styled shading and the sparkly, cloudyish background. I think it brings the characters more into focus, but that might just be me. Nice work.

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Thank you again! I love how you approach everything in the picture, it lets me know what you like and what not. *bows* Thank yoooou!

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!!! M-AZING! I like Kaoru better though...XD Hikaru is cool too

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I really like the way you draw hands... And I can't draw a sideview to save my life D:

Their expressions are wonderful and I love their hair! And the background. Gotta love the stars

<333

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Oh my goodness, the Hitachiin twins are sooo cute I want to be in the middle! Ahaha, nah. But still, it is quite cute, nicely done. ;D

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^^ That's a cute picture
Nice job!

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